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To Your Great Love

Lana V Lynx - Unofficial Challenge

By Susan PaytonPublished about 7 hours ago 1 min read
Photo By Elvis Bekmanis on Unsplash

Hello, my name is Paula, and I am John's ex-wife. I don't know why I was invited, but I was. What did John and his new wife, Cathy expect me to say. Cheers to the way you always have treated your sons, and cheers to the way, you always made our sons, seem second fiddle to Cathy's daughter, Cindy. But this isn't about the children is it, it is about yourselves, and your great love. I trust that now that you have tied the knot officially, you will have the decency to send your child support here on time. Cheers!

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Susan Payton

I love to write in every venue. I am 75 years old and try to make every day count,. I am learning a great deal about poetry on Vocal, and I am glad to be here.

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  • Lana V Lynxabout 3 hours ago

    Ouch, poor kids. Hopefully, child support will be coming :).

  • A. J. Schoenfeldabout 7 hours ago

    Wonderfully written! Perfect for the challenge!

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