Mr alien come and see
What on earth means the most to me
We will go out to the country side
Hop on a horse and go for a ride
Out on the fields so green
You will ride like a queen
The look on your face
When our horses start to race
Do I hear a chuckle
Are you wishing for a seat buckle
Youโll never feel as free
As on this ride with me
About the Creator
Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
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Comments (10)
Wonderful children's poem!!! Loving it!!!
SO sweet and freeing! ๐ฅนโค๏ธ What a beautiful adventure you have planned for this alien! Well done!
This was magnificent โฅ๏ธ
This is nice piece of work...i had to subscribe right after reading for it is the best and simple
Love it, Antoinette! Light and fun ๐๐
Loved this light hearted whimsical piece
Supercute! Great work!
Awww, this was so wonderful!
Similar theme as mine (https://survey-promotion.today/poets/alienation%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%29. I hope we don't steal each other's thunder! I enjoyed yours. Gerard
Very good, and Groot is so cute.