Brains With Demon Dreams
Come near you won’t regret the fear. It’s time to settle in October scare. One more day if you care. Who is more prone to a jump scare? Haikus by Cindy, Pamela and Sam Spinelli I am loving linked below. In the order that I’ve read them. ♥️
By Caitlin CharltonPublished 5 months ago • 1 min read
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They grow heads and teeth
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Eyes rolled back so you could see
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They don’t move — they eat
~Caitlin Charlton -
Pamela Williams
Cindy Calder
Sam Spinelli
About the Creator
Caitlin Charlton
Noir Writer & Close Reader. Spotting the elements of Eloquence.
Survivor. Reclaiming my own territory.
Let us read each other and leave the page free. 🖋️🔥👠
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Comments (24)
Scary WOWOWOWoooo
Ooooof this was creepy and so well penned! Congrats on placing fourth on this week's leaderboard Caitlin!!
Congratulations on your leaderboard placement Caitlin. You deserve it wholeheartedly you did such an excellent job with this piece! 🙂❤️⭐️💫
Creepy and clever, this haiku paints horror with such sharp, unsettling detail. Perfect October chills. 👻
Congratulations, Caitlin, good to see you getting some recognition.
Congratulations on the leaderboard placement!!! <3
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Those lines conjure such a haunting, almost nightmarish image in so few words.
Deliciously dark, Caitlin, with a fierce eyeball bite! Good luck on the challenge!
Super creepy, Caitlin, I am loving it!
That for sure was soooo creeepppyyyy! Gave me the chills! Loved it so much!
Superb writing; so fierce & creepy!
I love everything about this, Caitlin, including your creepy cover pic!!! I'm sharing this in the VSS. ⚡💙Bill⚡
This vision is planted in my mind. The image is stunning, which is probably why I can imagine it chewing. Very creepy haiku. Love it. Thank you for linking my haiku ❤️
Woah, that's creepy! Only three lines but they gonna haunt me for 3 days if not more. You're master of selecting the right words, in the right order!
Oh Caitlin, you created quite the dark visual that will sit with the reader for a while. And Thank you for featuring the others I now read them and they are wonderfully creepy as well.
I love this! And I love how you linked others! That's part of why I love this community so much. People hyping other people up and sharing things they enjoy. 💝💝
Ummm! This is deliciously creepy! Love it.
Great haiku, Caitlin, I've read them all!
I love it!!
Thank you for this and for giving other writers an uplift by sharing their stories
Wow! what an image and description of those 'Fang' souls.
Yikes! I will TRY to sleep tonight!
Creepy! The line about growing teeth made me think of odontogenic tumors 😬