Crescent Moon
Just Because Momentarily One Part Of Me Is Highlighted, It Doesn't Mean That All Of Me Isn't Whole.
Departed For A While
But I'm Back And Better...
The Sadness in My Heart
Was Repulsive...
Ain't Gonna Fib, The Journey
Hasn't Been As Amiable...
Seemed Like I'd Never
Surge Again...
It Was Hard To PinPoint
A Friend...
Tormented By Desperation
And Interminable Excruciating Night's...
Although I Felt Alone, There Lived An Optimistic Energy In My Soul...
Guiding Me Through The Hours Of Darkness...
So I Never Gave Up,
I Mooned A Greater Dream...
I Combated A Greater Fight, And Here I Am Today, Believing And Persevering For A Greater Life!
Just Because Momentarily One Part Of Me Is Highlighted, It Doesn't Mean That All Of Me Isn't Whole...
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
“ Public Diary, of an Urban LGBTQ Poet
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Comments (21)
I hope you are doing well, Lonzo. I love this poem. Congratulations on making last week's leadership board❣
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What a memorable and poignant last line. Congrats!!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Gorgeous & uplifting! Congrats on your leaderboard placement! 🫶🏾💪🏾👏🏾👏🏾💕
Love this. NICE.
Nice poem Lonzo. Hey, I wanted to ask you, I noticed that you published this poem four days ago. But now today it shows up as being published again just a few hours ago. How does that happen? I noticed that with a lot of your poems or stories. So I was curious if there’s some sort of glitch or something.
Loved the last line especially! Great poem.
This was extremely powerful and uplifting. Loved your poem!
This is exceptional!!! Loved it...especially I mooned a greater dream :)
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Good job and what a way to share yourself.
Enjoyed this vulnerable and deeply honest poem!
What a marvelous and uplifting metaphor.
Beautiful ❤️❤️
That last line hits hard! Nice poem.
The crescent moon metaphor is quietly powerful. Highlighting one part without denying wholeness gives this piece emotional balance.
Yup! We all need a moment from time to time. Loved how you expressed it here through poetry. 👏👏👏
You need to keep this and remember, when things feel bad, that this is also true.
Somewhere there is always our whole selves waiting for us to find it, your journey is unique. The right time arrives for you to find yourself again. Happy that you have.
Lovely image and words