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Ice melts a pool; this
flood is paralysis, life.
Ages sublimate.
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About the Creator
Mackenzie Davis
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Comments (10)
Excellent work. A feeling of destruction or loss of some type within the last line.. I can’t quite yet place it..but enjoyed nonetheless! 😊👏
Wow, I read this ten times. Very impressive, Mackenzie! You’ve got quite the knack for making Haiku’s, this one is beautiful!
Whoaaaaa! This was so deep and brilliant! You're so freaking amazing!
Melting snow was always so much fun to play with/in/around/through as a child.
This is brilliant.
Whoa. This is beautiful!! You are entering the haiku category of the awards, yes? Just making sure. ❤️
Beautiful haiku and lovely sound and rhyme to the words you’ve chosen ❤️
🤔🤔🤔 interesting poem How can you do these so fast?
Again??? just stunning!
You are insanely good at haiku!!! Please publish them all as a collection!