What do I feel?
I feel pain,
I feel loss,
I feel the overwhelm of nothing,
I embrace the abyss,
The blackness.
The dark.
All I have become is emptiness.
A dark whole that burns within.
A depth that most can't reach.
A pain in my side.
An overwhelm of darkness.
Of which nothing can subside.
Nothing will heal,
This pain that I feel.
This darkness will not end.
No light,
No tunnel,
No escape from the abyss.
Not even a cry for help.
Not a word.
No such thing as a peep.
Just a quiet whisper.
The one that cries "I need you"
Can anyone save me?
Help, I'm drowning in deep.
Chloe Rose Violet
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