
In the approach of serious matters,
rhyme is a distraction that only clatters
hollow, noisy emphasis on endings,
even if it causes the middle’s rending.
When it’s forced it gets no worse,
language mangled by a curse
that cares not for what came first,
obliterates it via verse.
Whitman knew this, broke the form;
art does not follow others’ norms
for the sake of untrained ears,
tossing salt to save the tears.
I abhor rhyme robbed of reason,
it’s a form of linguistic treason:
Language longs to lavishly linger,
tracing mouths with agile fingers,
and it tends to flee in shame
when sacrificed in rhyming’s name.
I prefer a last-line zinger.
About the Creator
Harper Lewis
I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me. Some of my fiction might have provoked divorce proceedings in another state.😈
MA English literature, College of Charleston


Comments (3)
I am fine with most poetry forms, but there are those with the equivalent detestation on non rhyme 😁
Love it!
Nice time to rhyme, great work