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What I Cannot Undo

On the Weight of Irrevocable Choice

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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I turned away and now I bear the cost

The choice I made returns in every breath

No prayer can mend the moment that I lost

The days are chains that bind me to the past

Each step reminds me of that silent death

I turned away and now I bear the cost

The path grows darker though the years have crossed

Regret consumes the very life it left

No prayer can mend the moment that I lost

I count the hours tally up the frost

The heart beats slow beneath its shroud of theft

I turned away and now I bear the cost

I hear the toll of all that I have tossed

Each memory strikes with merciless bequest

No prayer can mend the moment that I lost

Villanelle

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. I write about rural life, family, and the places I grew up around. My poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, My latest book. Check it out on Amazon

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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  • Tiffany Gordon5 months ago

    Fabulous work!

  • Sean A.5 months ago

    Well done! Great phrasing. Loved “count the hours, tally up the frost”

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